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Slave Market
Jennifer Portman was an attractive woman. She had long shiny red hair, green eyes,
and a great figure. She was a good person. She was always there for her friends and family.
Helped anyone she could. Her life was going great, until one afternoon. She heard a cry
coming from an allyway. "No, please, don't hurt me!" Jennifer had a sense of justice.
Whoever was torminting that poor girl was going to pay for it. She was going to give them a
piece of her 1st degree black belt in Shotokahn. When she arrived in the alleyway she saw a
muscular guy grabbing at a small woman. "Please, I'll do anything you ask just don't hurt
me!" She
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It's fine, he's got a dog
(M/f DiD)
Over the acres of rolling hills and wild underbrush constituting the Claverford Forest nature preserve tramped, determinedly, a lone figure. Her dark, auburn hair, normally so carefully arranged around her shoulders, blew haphazardly in the wind, streaming out behind her then, at a gust, whipping round into her face. She cursed and blew the strands away from her mouth. Walking boots worn over warm leggings and a trim, smart North Face jacket in red gave the impression that she must be a competent, experienced hiker, adequately prepared for a short expedition through familiar territory. But her furrowed eyebrows, hurried, slightly p
Literature
Slave Chain
I fiddle with the collar about my neck. It's all I know. I was born a slave. I can still remember my childhood of training and learning, all for this day. I remember the first time I had sex. Master said it should be special, that most slaves didn't get the honor that I would. I remember that I was afraid...but I enjoyed that night, and the nights that were to come. I remember the day he handed me over for a small purse of coins. My training was over. I was to be sold to someone else. I quickly snap back from the memories as my wrists are lashed together behind my back like a common prisoner. I would convey to the trader that it is not my des
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Final part of the story as Maddy and the other girls reach their new home...
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Aaaand done. Huh. To be honest, I feel kinda dissapointed.
It was good, of course, just like the previous chapters were. It just ended so... rapidly. Out of sudden - bam! - the end. And it's cool You went for a happy ending - the story would have turned out way too depressing otherwise - but it happenned too quickly. I believe even a brief info on what happened later (bad guys - prison, Maddy - some therapy and back home, etc.) would be better. That wouldn't have left a reader with one huge "whaaa-?" at the end.
The casino itself was amazing. All those ideas for use of slavegirls were clever, I really wished You showed more of it. A pity the scene is at the very and of the story and is rather short.
Now I want to tell about what I haven't liked since the beginning. Tom and Jim. Yeah, I know, it was a purpose to show they're "baaaaad", but You overdid them, I think. They're slavers, they kidnapped main antagonist - that's enough to make us dislike them. You, however, made sure that a reader will find them truly repulsive, given their characters and attitude toward slaves. It doesn't seem natural, though (not that I know anything about slaver's every-day reality ). I truly doubt that middle-aged professionalist, undoubtedly veterans of kidnapping "craft", would act as if they were villains of some comic book story ("They'll never find ya, mwahahaha!" - they behave kinda like this ). Compared with the casino manager and his thugs (cold, almost emotionless - that's much better for a slaver antagonist!), Tom's and Jim's behaviour could be named silly if it wasn't a pretty dark BDSM story.
I know I complain a lot, but I liked it overall Despite those things I pointed out above, You know how to attract a reader with your style, pace of the story, convincing descriptions of subduing and captivity. And that actually matters in bondage stories
It was good, of course, just like the previous chapters were. It just ended so... rapidly. Out of sudden - bam! - the end. And it's cool You went for a happy ending - the story would have turned out way too depressing otherwise - but it happenned too quickly. I believe even a brief info on what happened later (bad guys - prison, Maddy - some therapy and back home, etc.) would be better. That wouldn't have left a reader with one huge "whaaa-?" at the end.
The casino itself was amazing. All those ideas for use of slavegirls were clever, I really wished You showed more of it. A pity the scene is at the very and of the story and is rather short.
Now I want to tell about what I haven't liked since the beginning. Tom and Jim. Yeah, I know, it was a purpose to show they're "baaaaad", but You overdid them, I think. They're slavers, they kidnapped main antagonist - that's enough to make us dislike them. You, however, made sure that a reader will find them truly repulsive, given their characters and attitude toward slaves. It doesn't seem natural, though (not that I know anything about slaver's every-day reality ). I truly doubt that middle-aged professionalist, undoubtedly veterans of kidnapping "craft", would act as if they were villains of some comic book story ("They'll never find ya, mwahahaha!" - they behave kinda like this ). Compared with the casino manager and his thugs (cold, almost emotionless - that's much better for a slaver antagonist!), Tom's and Jim's behaviour could be named silly if it wasn't a pretty dark BDSM story.
I know I complain a lot, but I liked it overall Despite those things I pointed out above, You know how to attract a reader with your style, pace of the story, convincing descriptions of subduing and captivity. And that actually matters in bondage stories